Score: 7

"I sense something."

submission: Mekkah'z Newgroundeds X_x

date: December 26, 2007

Is it just me or are you attempting to rip off David Firth here?

*I like the park because a big balloon man lives there*

Score: 7

"Up two points!"

submission: Violent life chapter:2

date: December 15, 2007

Wow, I don't think I've ever seen this much effort put into a flash by an amateur. And I'll say it again: I review honestly, so let's start:

1. One thing that I must applaud you on is that you slowed down the slides, as was demanded by reviewers of your previous Flash. But alas, your spelling!
Please work on that! :)

2. The music is not only great, but it also fits with the whole flash. I would advise you to stay away from things like "Shut up you stupid character I made you so that means I make you do what I want you to do" and things like that. It's just a little distracting, really. It kind of sets the movie on a different course and that can bother the viewer (or me at least).

3. Change your comments to this if you can:

Well it took me like 3 hours but it's finally finished.
Violent life chapter:2 is finished and ready to kick some ass!
The sequel to violent life chapter:1 is here and let me say it's much better than the last one.
Still a little chunky on the art but better.
Not saying that violent life chapter:1 was bad but this one is better.
Anyway i finally know how to put a preloader and this one has it! :)
So there really isn't anything bad with it except that it's a slideshow.
Anyway hope you enjoy! :)

P.S.Sorry for the people that saw it first but I updated the credits and now there is the audio credits.(Music and artist for the music)

P. P. S. Recommend this flash for the ultra violence collections.

Note from Eggys: We'll work on your spelling! It makes you look more professional and stuff, so we'll get there!

Score: 7

"I love these kinds of games."

submission: Knight Tactics

date: December 15, 2007

To start off, a strategy game is always good, so so encourage you to make more of these. I only played the first level and beat it, but I'll still review on what I saw. I don't feel like playing it for endless hours at the moment. Anyway, one thing that bugged me out was that I had no healing mage, but the opposing side does. Does a healer of some sort come later? And I have to applaud you on the damage system, even though certain characters should have more HP than others. One thing lacking is that there is no background. There's just a big white emptiness where I'd love to see some crazy colors and patterns going on. Oh, and the story's not so bad. Just develop on the characters more, unless you want them to be seen as mindless warriors doing their job. But other than those things, this is one game I'll continue playing and I encourage more work of this sort coming from you!

btw, have you checked out Tactics Core Demo?

Here's the link:

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /84042

Score: 5

"haha."

submission: Cursor Escape 1

date: December 3, 2007

It's decent, but look at how the music plays over itself.

Score: 5

"Well, well, well"

submission: Violent life chapter:1

date: December 2, 2007

So you finally got a flash movie to pass through the portal. Congrats on that. Oh, by the way, we're good friends and all, but I'm still going to treat this as a regular review that I would do for any movie. So let's start off with this: it's excellent that your spelling is finally improving. Also, good job with having the music end at the right moment. A preloader would be nice though. You know where to get the official Newgrounds preloaders from, right? I'm not sure how to insert a preloader in front of a flash movie, but you will probably get it eventually. And is this some kind of official Hayabusa Clan movie? And on a side note, next time integrate a music file that is not so popularly known. That's the kind of thing that Newgrounds would like to see. Were you using keyframes? It's possible to keep multiple time lines so you can have more than one thing moving at the same time. Learn about tweening. That is how the greatest animators do it. If I were you, I would go to the Newgrounds Tutorials section and learn a number of things from there. All right, I'm sick of reviewing now.

Score: 9

"nice"

submission: Madness: Newgrounds

date: December 1, 2007

Although I wish there had been more of a plot to it, i'll give it a nine. I honestly think that this would have been better as a game of some sort. The whole thing is about our fellow alien anyway. In the beginning the frames are a little slow, but I don't even have flash, so I won't get there. Some of the combinations are a little e bit strange, like the Brakenwood one. On a last note, the Salad Fingers and Madness combination is perfect.

Hope to see more from you.

Score: 10

"This wins."

submission: Stamper </3

date: November 28, 2007

Hands down. Listen, it doesn't matter if it's unoriginal; who cares? It's not like Flash animators have limits on what they're doing, especially on Newgrounds. Oh, by the way, I really love how Stamper's fingers move that way on the keyboard. I wish my fingers could do that. And Tom forgives him...

Score: 9

"Voted 5"

submission: Legend Of Zelda:Misguided

date: November 23, 2007

Wow, am I glad that Zelda flashes are still made. I thought that they all died out after the Ocarina of time madness faded. I give this one a nine, and I'm happy to see a Zelda flash make it to the Front Page. I just think that this particular flash would have been a million times better if you had incorporated music of some sort. There are plenty of tracks to choose from, Look to the Koji Kondo orchestrations next time! I honestly hope to see more from you in the future.

Score: 8

"Wow, this is a hard game."

submission: Portal: The Flash Version

date: November 18, 2007

But I finally beat it. It's good, there are better. But I think the biggest flaws in this game are that it's slow and glitchy. I'd love to see those problems fixed.

Armor Games forever.

Score: 8

"Although I've never blown my whistle,"

submission: Blow The Whistle!

date: November 18, 2007

I still found this flash amusing. The images don't flash that much. And the song is really catchy, by the way. Cool