Score: 8

"DAMN"

submission: NG Preloader: The Game

date: May 26, 2008

seriously the last level pissed me off good but good idea

Score: 10

"Hello."

submission: YouTube Poop Soundboard

date: April 19, 2008

Let's not forget robotnick's overusage of "Penis" next time, okay? =]

Score: 8

"That was nice"

submission: Cow in Submarine

date: February 27, 2008

That's pretty enjoyable, it's a nice break from all the cock-jokes and tit jokes and stuff. Also, the Beatles are great, I love their music.

Score: 9

"Tankmen is back!"

submission: TANKMEN .5

date: January 20, 2008

Well, this is pretty good. I believe that you used the theme song from the Hulk TV series, am I right? And he becomes private Skittles! iYeah, i found the bonus movie, too. Next time, make it harder to find, that was too easy.

Score: 9

"That's awesome."

submission: Random Sonic Shorts

date: January 6, 2008

I thought this was going to be another ridiculous sprit movie, but this is thankfully different. You actually put effort into this. I lol'd...

I guess you'd get the jokes more if you played them as a kid, right? The music made me want to play the games again. I miss those days.

Score: 8

"Decent Enough."

submission: 4 Swords Misadventures2.2

date: January 5, 2008

I aproove. Although I must ask you, and I know about ZeldaUniverse.net, but is there a TLOZ anime? That would suck if there is, I'm already upset that the mangas exist. Oh, and congrats on 3rd place.

Score: 9

"Voting 5"

submission: My NG - Pezboy

date: December 31, 2007

It was a bit GENERIC in my opinion, but that's just me. If I were you, I'd expect to see this on the Front Page within a week. I have to keep a star in this review, only because yours was lacking something, like music for instance. Other than that, You did an excellent job. now... Go make more!

Score: 7

"I sense something."

submission: Mekkah'z Newgroundeds X_x

date: December 26, 2007

Is it just me or are you attempting to rip off David Firth here?

*I like the park because a big balloon man lives there*

Score: 7

"Up two points!"

submission: Violent life chapter:2

date: December 15, 2007

Wow, I don't think I've ever seen this much effort put into a flash by an amateur. And I'll say it again: I review honestly, so let's start:

1. One thing that I must applaud you on is that you slowed down the slides, as was demanded by reviewers of your previous Flash. But alas, your spelling!
Please work on that! :)

2. The music is not only great, but it also fits with the whole flash. I would advise you to stay away from things like "Shut up you stupid character I made you so that means I make you do what I want you to do" and things like that. It's just a little distracting, really. It kind of sets the movie on a different course and that can bother the viewer (or me at least).

3. Change your comments to this if you can:

Well it took me like 3 hours but it's finally finished.
Violent life chapter:2 is finished and ready to kick some ass!
The sequel to violent life chapter:1 is here and let me say it's much better than the last one.
Still a little chunky on the art but better.
Not saying that violent life chapter:1 was bad but this one is better.
Anyway i finally know how to put a preloader and this one has it! :)
So there really isn't anything bad with it except that it's a slideshow.
Anyway hope you enjoy! :)

P.S.Sorry for the people that saw it first but I updated the credits and now there is the audio credits.(Music and artist for the music)

P. P. S. Recommend this flash for the ultra violence collections.

Note from Eggys: We'll work on your spelling! It makes you look more professional and stuff, so we'll get there!

Score: 5

"Well, well, well"

submission: Violent life chapter:1

date: December 2, 2007

So you finally got a flash movie to pass through the portal. Congrats on that. Oh, by the way, we're good friends and all, but I'm still going to treat this as a regular review that I would do for any movie. So let's start off with this: it's excellent that your spelling is finally improving. Also, good job with having the music end at the right moment. A preloader would be nice though. You know where to get the official Newgrounds preloaders from, right? I'm not sure how to insert a preloader in front of a flash movie, but you will probably get it eventually. And is this some kind of official Hayabusa Clan movie? And on a side note, next time integrate a music file that is not so popularly known. That's the kind of thing that Newgrounds would like to see. Were you using keyframes? It's possible to keep multiple time lines so you can have more than one thing moving at the same time. Learn about tweening. That is how the greatest animators do it. If I were you, I would go to the Newgrounds Tutorials section and learn a number of things from there. All right, I'm sick of reviewing now.